Thesis:
Big data has the potential to positively influence the medical field through statistical analysis and predictive models. These things would make the medical field, specifically endocrinology, more efficient and precise when deciding treatment or predicting future events.
Sources:
- Big data analytics in health care: health care promise and potential (Medical journal) (Wullianallur Raghupathi, Viju Raghupathi)
- shows uses ad application of big data
- gives specific examples of how data is used
- gives specific examples of the potential of specific data
- shows pros ad cons
- The big data revolution in healthcare (medical journal)
- application of big data in health care
- specific examples of how big data is going to be used
- The role of big data In medicine (medical journal)
- what we can use big data for in medicine
- Evidence based endocrinology ad clinical epidemiology (library database article)
- specific medical field that uses big data
- The age of big data (online article)overview
- general overview of what big data is and its application/ potential
Looks good, thesis is definitely specific and clearly informs the reader what the topic of the paper is. Good source material too.
Hi, Matt,
Your thesis statement narrows to a specific field and also relates your stance. Consider the topic of privacy, too, though. You will want to address that directly in the thesis.
Your sources look reliable and useful to your project.
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Good start!